''OK'' said the knight . They had a big battle. Bing Bing went the swords and the knight sliced the robots head off.
I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Ms Ah Kui.
Wednesday, 31 August 2011
The Brave Knight
Once there was a knight. He was a brave knight . He lived in a palace. One day the knight found an invitation.So he carefully took it out and shot away like a shooting star. It took him two days to get to the kingdom of doom. The next day he entered the kingdom of doom. The kingdom of doom looked like it had booby-traps, but did it? Once he stepped inside...BANG! went the sword. A robot came out and said ''I want to challenge"
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Well done for using the interesting verbs we found in our story in your own writing. Keep looking for more interesting verbs when you read to add to your memory so your writing can get better too!
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