It was windy as I looked out from the stadium to see Piri Weepu... he shouted across the field like a lion roaring. Mr Piri was slapping his chest, stomping his knees and his arms were rising up. Piri Weepu was focussed on the opposition while he was doing the haka.
Piri Weepu is a focussed man with pumped up shoulders and boosted up muscles. He likes his t-shirt with the number 9 on it and he takes his job seriously. He is always fierce like a bull. The man sprints very quickly and holds the ball strongly. He is very proud of the work he has done.
Weepu was born on 1983 and his worst subjects were English, Maths and Science. He even likes to spend breaks in Rarotonga and Samoa. Piri loves his family. Are you aware that Piri Weepu likes to play other sport too, like golf and racing with cars and that his favourite place to eat is Mc Donald's.
I liked the similes you used in your writing Misimoa to make your description of Piri Weepu come alive. I felt like I was watching him on T.V!
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