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Tuesday 3 December 2013

Misimoa - T4 Writing Sample 2013

It was a boiling hot day and the sun was just shooting out it’s blades of fire . I got a text for my friends and they were just informing me about our overnight camp at the Piha. So I started to pack my clothes and headed off to pick up a couple of mates. It was a long ride and the temperature out there was way to hot. We finally arrive at Piha mills and was satisfied that we were out of the sun. we rush into the lounge and the owner settled some rules and the boundaries of Piha. We took our bags from the car and all chose to sleep in one cabin.We were really engaged with the archery because we felt like we were inside the hunger games. We played for a while and the sun was starting to go home, so we decided that we should go sleep. It was the 3:32 and then we could hear a weird gorilla noise coming from outside. We turn on the lights and noticed that Daniel was out of bed and so we walked out and saw Daniel just standing there in a strange position, His veins were bursting out and he was straining his whole body. He look really tense. I walked up to him and whispered “Daniel come inside it’s late. then he replayed “My name is not Daneil” and he kept saying that like he was some sort of parrot repeating himself over and over again. After a couple of seconds he ran into the forest and so I ran into the cabin and told some off my other friends that he ran into the forest and that we had to go find him.Now it was 4:00 and we turn on our torches and we to go search for him. Then we found him and he was inside some sort of bush rocking back and forth. His eyes were pale white and it looked like he was possessed by a demon or something like that. So we grabbed hold his body and took him back but he kept trying to fight out of it and then he head butted one of my friends and my friend was knocked out cold. We couldn't get him up for like half an hour then he finally woke up. and once we got Daniel back to the camp-site the first word he said was “Hey guys what are we doing here” I told what happened but he wouldn't believe me but then after that everyone started to call him demon boy because of that incident. After that incident no one went camping again and no one knows if he will turn again and be warned because he just might turn up inside your room . . .




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